Re: Feedback for Off Course, Scenes, Touch & Red-Headed

["bighotvirgo" <bighotvirgo@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks, Alex! and yes, more to come. Couple more fixing them 
up scenes in this part-have to end all this flashback stuff on a 
high note, then comes the next big part, up to speed with Buffy in 
New Mexico

god there's a lot of good stuff coming across the board right 
now, huh?


--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Alex <pga1ht@o...> 
wrote:
> CDS - Glad to see you continuing this. I really enjoy the way 
you write Anya - the conversation she had with Dawn was 
priceless. Hope to see more soon! 
> 
> Jen - Interesting twists, Buffy not knowing she's a potential, 
and Will seeming to be somewhat skeptical of magic. I'm very 
curious as to where this will go. 
> 
> BHV - Whoa - Xander unleashes on Buffy! A well-written 
scene, and he said some things she needed to hear. As 
always, a very nice part - very much looking forward to more. 
> 
> Kimber - A very nice start. I think you've captured the 
characters well - this is a totally believible situation. I'm anxious 
to see where things lead. 
> 
> To all of you; thanks for sharing with us and keep up the good 
work. 
> 
> Alex 
> pga1ht@o... 
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