Re: DanSpector's FIC : "Of Stakes & Spells" 20/?

["satanslilangl" <satanslilangl@xxxxxxxxx>]

Whoa . . . .

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. . . .

That was a lot of words to say a lot of small things, but i LOVE a 
good ramble.   But yours was really well focused and it made sense, 
so in other words; way better than mine!

Okay, this is all in there for the Plot-reasons, and the way *I* see 
Buffy in this story and i hate to be a Sh!t-Head in saying . . . 'All 
things shall be es-planed in time young Grass-hopper'.  I know, i 
hate hearing it when others say it too . . . i hate me right now.

I LOVE SPOILERS, and i give them out a free will, but as to a promise 
to my silent partner in this endevor -- no-so-silent anymore i guess, 
huh? -- i can't do this with this Fic.   I think that a good story 
should be kind of Shakespearian in nature: before you even read it, 
you can know the end, and still leave you in tears of sadness/joy by 
the time you've read the end.   I wish my fic had that potential, 
but . . . oh well.

As for the stone floor, i mean the fake-marble tile they have like in 
my hospital.   or, quite possibly Seudo-Stone finish like they have 
in the One i went to in Aspen . . . let's not re-visit that please.

Long Story longer: I AGREE.   when i was young and nieve and thought 
up this fic, this was in this from the start.  I'm sorry to sound 
like i'm shooting you down, but it makes sense in this story, and for 
the plot.   =(

Thanks for thinking my Voice-definition is getting better, and i hope 
that you review on the next few chapters, 'cause they're gonna geta 
little spicy, and that's what i really need work on.  please feel 
free to send feed-back when that stuff gets put-up.

Thanks for the review and the nit-pickyness, that's always good to 
get.   i was expecting tones of that kind of stuff for another 
Fiction i read, and i got none.   shows you have so guts and won't 
just take the off-colorness of a story.   i respect that, and I'm 
sorry i couldn't give you a better answer.

~VixenRaign~




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