Re: FIC: Love Shack (CH3) B/W NC-17 1/6

["Kim" <webmistress@xxxxxxxxxx>]

D, 

thank you for the kind words

Even though it has been YEARS between chapters - the actual amount of
time B & W have been together in the piece so far is relatively short
- 4, 6 weeks - so the honeymoon isn't over yet, especially considering
I initially used this as a way to practice writing sex scenes, the
'honeymoon' isn;t ending any time soon. \

The thing that really hit Willow in this chapter was the knowledge
(and I glossed over the spelling out of this part) is that a poor
relationship with her parents hurts her. Not seeing Oz hurts her. But
she only really 'comes undone' at the thought of lossing Buffy. Maybe
her relationship with B is more profound than friendly lovers?

Not only that but I purposely have not portrayed their relationship as
some great epoc love. They love each other, that is not in question
but their initial reason for coming together was not long denied or
suppressed feelings for each other. They are just starting to realize
the love they have for each other is an "in love" kinda thing, not
just a friendship thing.

Their first joining was a friendship/comfort thing, the whole 'in
love' aspect has grown from that

as for Willow's reaction to Buffy's mortality - that's for the next
chapter to bring out more

Thanks 

kimly


> BRAVO!!! I must say I enjoyed this installment. All too often fics
that have
> Buffy and Willow as a couple don't deal with the emotional turmoil
it must
> be for Willow, knowing that at anytime she could lose Buffy. I'm not
saying
> it's a bad thing, who wants to dwell on that depressing fact,
especially if
> the fic is an angst fic to begin with. But to think that once they
declare
> their undying love to one another that Willow would just forget the
danger
> that Buffy faces every night, or not have a melt down at some point
about
> it, is difficult because we all know Willow's personality, and I truly
> believe that after the initial Honeymoon stage, she would melt down.
>
> D
>  -- 
> "A vague disclaimer is nobody's friend"


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