Writing Exercises

[Mad Hamlet <Mad-Hamlet@xxxxxxx>]

Greetings,

So I was having a discussion with one of my 'Editors'(They are far cooler and
more experienced then a Beta-reader so they get cooler titles)
They, in the course of our discussion centered around the niceities of above
par B/W erotica, uttered the phrase 'Play By Play' And somehow the following
scrolled itself from my mind.

****

AAAAANNnnnnddd there's the opening bell! 
Roseberg is off to a fast start with a lathering of 
the Slayers belly, oh did you see that unsnap manuver?

Sure did Ringo, wow Rosenbergs bra cleared the headboard. I havn't
seen anything like since the big Buffy Orgy in-


Have to interupt you there GogoDodo; this action is getting fast and 
furious! Now Rosenberg is going for the buckle, Summers is distracted,
Rosenberg might be doing a stealth softfondle.

Gotta love those softfondles.

Yes indeed, GogoDodo!! Wow, Summers is making a comebadck. She's got
Rosenbergs shirt over her heard but Rosenberg counters. Yes, yes she's on
fire! Oh look at her go, Summers' head is flung back, she's losing cohesion,
Rosenberg has the pants down and it's GOOOOODDD!!!


****

This therefore is further evidence that I am deeply, deeply disturbed.
So, just for giggles and production, take a comedic POV, like Sports Casters,
or somebody and use em' to describe a erotic B/W moment. Just for the mental
tramua of it.

****

'So you can see, they really do belong. Despite all this, despite it being an
echo, a shell, not quite totally real yet believed that way, they are
together.

Can you see it here, tell me truly, can you see? There they lie. Together.
On the bed.

Satied.

Becalmed.

Satisfied.

One.

There is something about them, if they are real, if anything is real in this
place, yes....something about them. More. More than the norm here. They can
speak. And love. I did not understand, and I still don't understand. I will of
course conquer all; it is my destiny but when I take them, this 'Buffy the
Vampire Slayer, and her lover Willow, I will miss them.

For a moment.

A split second I assure you, a mere flash of weakness in a dragons eye yet it
will be more than any other member of your species gets.

Yes, they are something special.

Wouldn't you agree...Mr. Anderson.'

****

Agent Smith. Right...

Okay, so...you know what to do. Let's see if you can.

I remain, as always,
Mad-Hamlet



A requirement that literature or art conform to some norm prescribed by an
official smacks of an ideology foreign to our system.
                      William O. Douglas
                      Supreme Court Justice



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