Re: Writing Exercises

["mike" <wizathogwarts@xxxxxxxxx>]

I'm not sure I got the point your were trying to make, that is if 
you were trying to point anything out, but it was verrrrrry funny, 
so maybe I missed the point while I was laughing.

--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Mad Hamlet <Mad-
Hamlet@u...> wrote:
> Greetings,
>
> So I was having a discussion with one of my 'Editors'(They are far 
cooler and
> more experienced then a Beta-reader so they get cooler titles)
> They, in the course of our discussion centered around the 
niceities of above
> par B/W erotica, uttered the phrase 'Play By Play' And somehow the 
following
> scrolled itself from my mind.
>
> ****
>
>  AAAAANNnnnnddd there's the opening bell! 
> Roseberg is off to a fast start with a lathering of 
> the Slayers belly, oh did you see that unsnap manuver?
>  
> Sure did Ringo, wow Rosenbergs bra cleared the headboard. I havn't
> seen anything like since the big Buffy Orgy in-
>
>
> Have to interupt you there GogoDodo; this action is getting fast 
and 
> furious! Now Rosenberg is going for the buckle, Summers is 
distracted,
> Rosenberg might be doing a stealth softfondle.
>
> Gotta love those softfondles.
>
> Yes indeed, GogoDodo!! Wow, Summers is making a comebadck. She's 
got
> Rosenbergs shirt over her heard but Rosenberg counters. Yes, yes 
she's on
> fire! Oh look at her go, Summers' head is flung back, she's losing 
cohesion,
> Rosenberg has the pants down and it's GOOOOODDD!!!
>
>
> ****
>
> This therefore is further evidence that I am deeply, deeply 
disturbed.
> So, just for giggles and production, take a comedic POV, like 
Sports Casters,
> or somebody and use em' to describe a erotic B/W moment. Just for 
the mental
> tramua of it.
>
> ****
>
> 'So you can see, they really do belong. Despite all this, despite 
it being an
> echo, a shell, not quite totally real yet believed that way, they 
are
> together.
>
> Can you see it here, tell me truly, can you see? There they lie. 
Together.
> On the bed.
>
> Satied.
>
> Becalmed.
>
> Satisfied.
>
> One.
>
> There is something about them, if they are real, if anything is 
real in this
> place, yes....something about them. More. More than the norm here. 
They can
> speak. And love. I did not understand, and I still don't 
understand. I will of
> course conquer all; it is my destiny but when I take them, 
this 'Buffy the
> Vampire Slayer, and her lover Willow, I will miss them.
>
> For a moment.
>
> A split second I assure you, a mere flash of weakness in a dragons 
eye yet it
> will be more than any other member of your species gets.
>
> Yes, they are something special.
>
> Wouldn't you agree...Mr. Anderson.'
>
> ****
>
> Agent Smith. Right...
>
> Okay, so...you know what to do. Let's see if you can.
>
> I remain, as always,
> Mad-Hamlet
>
>
>
> A requirement that literature or art conform to some norm 
prescribed by an
> official smacks of an ideology foreign to our system.
>                        William O. Douglas
>                        Supreme Court Justice
>
>
>
> Come and Get BRUTALised. 
> The Femslash Comment and Critque List.
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/BrutalCC/
>
>
> Look upon my work ye mighty and...ah skip it.
> http://www.realmoftheshadow.com/madhamlet.htm
>                                      -Mad Hamlet


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