Re: [FIC: Noir(1/1)]

["jin_hayte" <jinhayte@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

hmm, what to say what to say that hasn't been said or will be said?
I can say this: from the moment I saw your Noir art, I just had this
nagging feeling that there's gotta be a story behind them. I was right.

you did a good job at putting me, the reader, in the cold, wet
environment of the backstreets of LA. Though that goes without saying.

"The blonde, my 'sweetheart' cannonballed past me like a torpedo and
demolished the gang-bangers. Real quick, real efficient, lots of
cracks, and pops. Joints being introduced to geometry; right angles,
forty five degree angles all of them in the directions opposite what
nature intended. Teeth met the ground and their former owners met the
pavement short moments later. Even shorty got busted up."

fast, direct, violent. the 'introdyced to geometry' part made me
chuckle and what came right after made me wince.

Nice work.

/Jin



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