This is part of a larger series, right? You can't just leave it at
Vamp!Buffy and Vamp!Willow driving off into the night with a car full of dead
Xander.
I like the way you've laid it out that while Buffy and Willow have turned,
they retained much of what they were while still being believable as
vampires. The Buffy/Willow love making scene was nicely done (got the old heart
rate up). The letter idea was a good one and a further sign that they
haven't become just the usual kill/crush/destroy type of vamp.
Interesting how you've got Willow being Buffy's sire and Buffy being
Xander's sire. It establishes a pecking order to control Xander if he becomes
just a demon (I doubt it, by the end of season 7 it's pretty ingrained
in Xander to follow Buffy and Willow. Plus there's the matter of the magic
Xander got hit with up on Kingman's Bluff). I also liked that it was Buffy that
proposed that they turn Xander, I would have expected Willow to be the one to
bring it up.
Anyway, very nicely done and can we PLEASE have some more?
Mike McD
Willow: "It's a good fight, Buffy, and I want in."
Buffy: "I kinda love you."
--'Choices'
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