OT: Talking Heads in Totally Snowed

[Silverna <silvernawolfe@xxxxxxxxx>]

In reference to Jin, Exiled & other's comments on many
talking heads in Totally Snowed I went back and read
it (as a reader who is not the all-knowing author) and
Oh My God.

It's a mess! ;)

No really. I had a lot of trouble telling who was
talking which I can't believe I didn't pick up on
before. So thanks for the headsup everyone - I'm
currently rewriting it to hopefully alleviate all
confusion. Then I'll repost it. This is such a useful
learning exercise.

Also another thanks to Jin who has been great
explaining about what I can actually do to fix the
prob. I think I favour the first option too.


		
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