Feedback for Turned, Prisms and The Summoned

[Michiruka <young_fire2@xxxxxxxxx>]

Okay, first thing first. Prisms.

 

Interesting plot, story idea, etc. It was rather interesting. I liked it.

However, you looked like you had the need for a beta and that kinda got on my nerves a bit. Not that it was so bad I couldn't read it, just certain things that were obvious enough to be able to be fixed.

 

Turned

 

I love this story. Its funny and sexy and intriguing at the same time. I hated the kiss at the end of one of the best episodes too so its an interesting take on how it could've gone different. I can't wait til you put up the rest of it. (:

 

and The Summoned

 

I feel bad for not putting up feedback for this earlier but I haven't been online much as of late due to problems. This is an amazing fic. Everything about it. Its ideas, the plot. I wish I had the mind to think of something like that. Its very good and I'm sorry I didn't get this out there earlier. I do hope you write the rest of it. It would be a shame to leave an idea that good just lay unheard from.

 

~Michi

Buffy saw the deer-in-the-headlights look on her mom's face and trailed
off.  She realized just how much she had shared and gulped loudly.  "Uh,
can you ignore that last bit?  Please?  Just forget I ever said it."

"I'm trying to, I really am," Joyce replied.

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