On Tue, 20 Jun 2000 05:15:28 -0000, you wrote:
>The next part is coming soon. I'm open to all suggestions and
>critism.
Good! I like it. That makes an excellent opener, gives us
plenty of hints as to the background. Hopefully you'll be
fleshing them out more in Part 2?
I'm a little concenrned that Buffy is on her own in the cell. I
can only think of one area of a prison where prisoners are
routinely kept solo.
Stephen
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