Feedback:: Fic: The Vamp Trap (1/?)

[cilia@xxxxx]

Feedback...

Sticking to my new philosophy, you see I told you this would come 
back to bite me, I'm going to try and give an honest and detailed 
feedback. This will hopefully be the standard format I'll use when 
giving feedback, where I'll deal fist the over-all story, then with 
individual scenes that I feel stand out and ending with commenting on 
the relationships and/or character interaction.

Here we go...

Feedback on The Vamp Trap (1/?) by Angelina:

As a comedy piece this works quite well, still the beginning left me 
wondering just what the hell was going on. If I hadn't read the 
actual challenge I might have found myself a bit lost at the start. 
Though this clears up quickly as the story kicks into gear.

The scenes with Vamp Willow are played out nicely, she comes of very 
Drusilla like, but with that naughty behavior that defines her 
persona. The scene were Buffy has to forcefully remove her hand from 
a place that shall go unmentioned and the whole interaction between 
her and Angel is excellent writing.

As for the relationships: They seem well established at the start of 
the story, but although I'm still slightly confused about the status 
of the B/W and an explanation about how the Faith/Cordelia pairing 
came about would be appreciated, but it is by no means necessary. 

Well that's it,
Cilia