Re: Fic: The Vamp Trap (2/?)

[cilia@xxxxx]

Hi Angelina and the rest who happen to sumble into this feedback

Feedback on The Vamp Trap (2) by Angelina

-Story-
The story is moving along nicely and I look foward to seeing what 
Vamp Willow does to Spike, whom I might add is the best think 
the "creative" mind of Joss has ever come up with, but anyways. The 
parts short but it does it role in evolving the story. Extra points 
for that lint covered life saver and every scene that has Vamp Willow 
touching Angel.
Now this is a comedy so I won't go into pesky little things like 
plots.

-Scenes-
I would love to see the Indiana Jones fetish played out. Nothing 
sticks out, but they all give a good chuckle.

-Characters-
Nice, though Angel is little off, but nothing I wouldn't expect from 
a comendy piece. Vamp Willow this girl just makes me laugh.

That's it!
Cilia

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., angelina2006@h... wrote:
> TITLE: The Vamp Trap
> AUTHOR: Angelina (angelina2006@h...)
> DISCLAIMER: All characters belong to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. 
> SUMMARY: Vamp Willow is stuck in the real world, what's to be done?
> PAIRING: Buffy/Willow & Cordy/Faith
> SPOILERS: Set after Doppelgangland and some reference is made to 
The 
> Wish and Lover's Walk. This however, is an alternate world. Could 
> maybe be in the aftermath of Girls Interrupted and My Slayer Lady.
> DISTRIBUTION ? You want it? It's yours, just drop me an e-mail.
> AUTHOR'S NOTES: All feedback welcome. "Mochas?" "Yes please!"  
This 
> is written in response to a challenge issued by Stephen