Re: FF: An extended Snippet...

["Steven Williams" <garrek42@xxxxxxxxx>]

It needs a begining and an ending but other then that it's cool. I suppose It could also use a bit of smut, cause that's what sells. Anyway, it flows well, and the characters are well thought out and written. You should complete it and post it for us to read. 
And when have you ever known us to be mean? Even Cilla's new honesty policyis always nice, honest but nice. You see we try not to chase the new talent off, cause they might do something sick, like start to write fanfic for hte teletubbies. *G*
Steven