Re: first story (The Big Bad)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Tray,

Good first effort, I'm looking forward to more. Nice little romantic
mess you've got going there: Cordy wants Faith, who wants Willow, who
wants Buffy, who probably doesn't know what she wants. I did see the
punchline coming a sentence or two ahead of time, but that hardly
spoiled it.

And an existing-couples fic always makes me laugh at the convulsions
authors of falling-in-love fics put the characters through (myself
included). All the endless chapters of "should I? She couldn't?"
etc., and here you reduce it to "I was drunk one night and got in the
wrong bed by accident." ROTF!

As for critiques, nothing big. I think you might not have Cordy voiced
quite as well as you do the others, and I personally would like to get a
better idea of when this occurs (Season 4? Season 5?) and whether Faith
ever hooked up with the Mayor and all that sort of thing, but I know a
lot of people just accept an AU and don't worry about it.

Keep it up,

Dan