Re: FIC: To Thine Own Self Be True 4/undetermined.

[jeepy91@xxxxxxx]

Two posts in one day, loving that so much LOL

I really loved your take on the water fountain scene. They way their eyes 
locked and Buffy was entranced by Will. Going back and watching that 
episode, it's so incredibly apparent the connection they immediately had. 
You played that to a T.

The hook up was a little quick, but I liked it. Sometimes its better to do 
it that way, and have them bonding while they're already together. And it 
was nice how you had Willow overhear in the library instead of Xander. I 
wish the show would have done it that way.

Overall, another great part, loving it even more now that Buffy's in 
Sunnydale. Can't wait to read more :)

Casandra
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Buffy:"I could wrestle naked in grease for a living and still be cleaner than 
after a shift at the Doublemeat."
Willow:"Plus, I'd visit you at work every single day."
-'Normal Again' Shooting Script










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