Dispelling the Darkness

["TheBear" <thebear@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Red Willow, you never cease to amaze and please me with your work. This
was poignant and powerful. I was overwhelmed by the pain and sorrow
between the characters, yet it was done with a flavor of realism that so
many angsterrific stories lack. I found the device of flashbacks with
extensions to canon scenes to be delightful, and they added to the feel
of 'realism' in this story; as if it wouldn't be at all out of place as
a beginning to season seven- though we, of course, know that Martijoss
will never allow such a perfect relationship to flourish.

Well done, and done very well. 





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