okay Dan...

[Joey Lee <xenarip13@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thank you Dan I am so glad you liked it. It really
was a spur of the moment wouldn't shut up kind of
thing, but sometimes that is the way to go. I have a
few more ideas up my sleeves. I just saw the repeat
of the season finale and I am ready for the new
season. I hope to see some back to basics as they
promise. thanks again.
Bynx
--- danspector@xxxxxxxxx wrote:
> Bynx,
> 
> Sorry I took a couple of days to respond. 
> 
> First, I'm really glad to see you've worked around
> your disconnection
> from the show. Even though you had the good sense
> to stop watching last
> season, there are still any number of stories that
> can be told about
> moments in previous seasons (to say nothing of
> out-and-out AUs). And I
> enjoy the way you tell them.
> 
> Second, this was by no means pure fluff. Far too
> much angst and erotica
> to qualify as that. (You want fluff, read the
> "Faith has poison ivy"
> trifle I posted to some other lists after Eliza's
> appearance on
> Letterman. Not that there's anything wrong with
> fluff.)
> 
> Third, interesting use of the present tense. At
> first it disoriented me
> a little (it's usually used in more action-heavy
> fics), but then I saw
> the point. The letter is about what Buffy thinks
> will happen "When You
> Read This" and so we see Willow's reaction in the
> moment, just as Buffy
> sees it. Neat.
> 
> Fourth, loved the concept that Buffy had promised
> never to run away
> again. Missing scene from "Dead Man's Party",
> anyone?
> 
> Lastly, I enjoyed the sappy stuff. (Sap or mush is
> different from
> fluff, btw. Fluff makes you go "ahhh", mush makes
> you go "awww".) From
> the bit where Tara already knew that Willow loved
> Buffy to the moment
> when Willow tells Buffy that "It's about love,
> Buffy, that's the
> difference."
> 
> Awww. (See?)
> 
> More, please. (And no excuses now, since you just
> proved your last one
> wrong <G>)
> 
> Dan
> 
> 


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