Re: [buffyandwillowslash] Fic: Primeval (2/?)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Ah, Tara-the-love-goddess, an oldie but a goodie. Got to love Buffy's
reaction here, and I definitely agree with the idea that someone should
be making sure the girls find each other--they need to be together.

And they got together in a nicely saucy way, I must say :) Thank you.

Just two minor complaints. First, you occasionally wandered from past
tense to present, which I find a little distracting, and secondly,
there's that "Wills" thing, which is one of my pet peeves. I won't go
too crazy, since I like to be nice to new authors (and you have a
**lot** of company on this, alas), but let me point out that Buffy has
**never** called Willow "Wills" on the show, nor has anyone else. It's
"Will", not "Wills".

(See, I made it through that without cursing at all. Yay, me.)

Dan

who's at least grateful that you don't call Buffy--erp, no, definitely
not putting that idea in anyone's mind :)