Re: [buffyandwillowslash] Fic: Primeval (2/?)

["Electronis" <warbird@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

The tense thing is one of my bad habits, I've had problems with it 
forever. I was an Electrical Engineering major, and now I'm an 
Information Sciences and Technology major, so I have somewhat of an 
excuse as to why my writing English is not so good. Even still, one 
of my friends IS an English major and he mixes up tenses and 
contractions from time to time. We're not perfect. And, since this 
is somewhat of an alternative universe akin to the Wish-verse, (The 
Yoko-verse? Please god no!!!!!!!!!), Buffy can't develop pet names 
for the woman she loves? I don't think I've ever heard either Willow 
or Tara EVER say something like "Goddess, you're so beautiful", but 
that pops a lot in fan fic too. I must say, I do agree with you 
about people calling Buffy something other than Buffy, Buff, or 
Buffster. And while we are on the subject of pet peeves, another of 
my personal ones that I try to carefully avoid, which I hinted at 
before is when people say 'YOUR' when they mean 'YOU'RE'. 'YOUR' is 
used to signify possesion of an object, such as your car or your 
dog. If you want to say something like you are a good person, then 
it's 'you're a good person' not 'your a good person.'