Re: Re: [buffyandwillowslash] Fic: Primeval (2/?)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Electronis,

As noted in my reply to Ida, I figured that the tense thing was an
unconscious goof, and I wasn't taking you to task for it. Hope I didn't
offend.

"We all screw up."--Buffy, "Normal Again" (I myself spotted at least
five typos upon rereading my "Help" review--sorry, everybody, but 3:00
am is not a great time for proofreading--so don't sweat it.)

On pet names, sure, I'd love to see Buffy start calling Will "honey" or
"pumpkin" or "Will-O'-My-Heart" or whatever. (Heck, I was annoyed when
Tara took to calling **everyone** "sweetie"! That's her name for
Willow, darn it!) I don't know if it'd happen within the first few hours
of the relationship, though. And I have a particular itch about
"Wills", as explained in the other post--which, I stress again, is just
my mentioning things that ruffle me, and not a specific criticism of
you're (hah!) work.

Actually, your personal peeve is one I can't be too high and mighty
about, since I have a terrible habit of spelling the word that means
"belonging to it" as "it's" when I know that it's "its". So I let
others cast the first stone there. But I totally agree.

Anyway, I hardly want the feedback to overwhelm the fic. Looking
forward to part 3, whenever you get the chance.

Best wishes,

Dan