Re:Blinviz

["ivygort" <ivygort@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I normally try to answer feedback off list but Blinviz asked for a general
dicussion.


> I still have a problem with first person in general in fanfic, but
> perhaps that's just me.  I just don't believe that people make
> such spontaneous, clear insights about themselves.  In my
> opinion, it would be more believable >to describe the scene in
s>uch a way that we, the readers, understand what's going on
> wih Buffy at an unconscious level without her explaining it to us.


I use both first person (fp) and third person (tp) in my stories.  I used to
hate reading fp until I started reading Mad Hamlet and saw the emotion that
he was able to create with it.  So when I want a 'in your face' emotion for
a short and hopefully intense story I use fp.  When the story is longer or
more action based I use tp.

Thanks for you comments.




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Buffy:  "I kinda love you."
                     'Choices'

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