Re: FIC: Halfway to Anywhere - Chapter 2/9

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Pretty good stuff here, Jin.  Liked Kennedy looking down at her shoes
after the metaphorical "filling Buffy's shoes" convo she had with
Willow.  And Willow staring after Buffy, oblivious to Ken's
reactionokay not much to worry about on the W/K front <g>.  (Ditto
for Spuffy, with "&and I'm with&who, Spike?"  Buffy, if you can't
even recall the guy's name, it's not likely to work out&)

Glad to see more of the B/W collaboration we only got a glimpse of in
the actual "Storyteller", although I'm still agog that the writers, in
their zeal to make sure the Scoobs have absolutely zero to do with
Buffy's life (because OnlySpike is watching her back, dontcha know?)
managed to 

a) for the second consecutive ep, leave Giles entirely out of a plot
built around an ancient mystical object, with writing in a dead language
on it  (as bizarre as leaving him out an all-tweed ep, IMO), and

b) send Buffy to deactivate the mystic seal, yet somehow have her leave
behind the **powerful witch** who we just saw **figure out what to do**.
Sounds like someone you'd like to have with you in case there's a hitch,
no?  (And, this being Sunnydale, and all&)

So, I wish you hadn't been quite so canon's captive there, because that
bout of "Leave Me, Lowly Humans!  Only Allegedly-Redeemed Vampires May
Accompany the Solitary Warrior!" really grated my parmesan. [/grumble] 
But still, lots of fun, keep it up!

Dan

Although the idea that Andrew (dual murderer who tried to frame Buffy
for his crimes, many times attempted murderer, kidnapper, attempted
rapist, fugitive from justice) is somehow an "innocent"&wow, if you
roll your eyes back far enough, you can see your throat!  Who knew?



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