Re: Fic: Totally Snowed (Christmas Theme) B/W PG13

["jin_hayte" <jinhayte@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

At first, I wanted to print this fic out, roll the papers together and
slap you with them for using so god damn many talking heads. 

I mean, JESUS.

First two pieces of dialogue that contained said talking heads
confused the hell out of me. I came THIS close to pressing the back
button.

But I stuck with it and in the next two dialogues, the flow was
better, felt more natural. You could really feel the pace in which the
characters were talking.

Still, this heavy usage of talking heads (that's the last time I say
it, I swear) is always - ALWAYS - bad. Stories have been ruined
because of them.

However, this is a real Christmasy treat, and had I been in the
Christmas-spirit, this would've been perfect. Nice settings, none of
the angsty clichés, nice characterization (for the most part) and just
a great Christmas feel, what with the snow and the moccas and the
handholding and everything.

Fix the talking heads (ok, so I lied) and you've got yourself a winner
(in what, I'm not sure).

--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Silverna <silvernawolfe@y...>
wrote:
> Totally Snowed
> by Silverna
> (silvernawolfe@y...)
>
> This is a Christmas themed romantic fic for the Wiffy
> board.





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