Re: Re: Fic: Totally Snowed (Christmas Theme) B/W PG13

[Silverna <silvernawolfe@xxxxxxxxx>]

> Still, this heavy usage of talking heads (that's the
> last time I say
> it, I swear) is always - ALWAYS - bad. Stories have
> been ruined
> because of them.

Thanks for the comments Jin. Help me out here so I get
this right next time...talking heads means dialogue
back and forth without appropriate 'saids' and
emotions? Or do you just mean too much talking with
nothing in between? What's a good way to layout long
conversations?

Headsup to me,
Silverna


		
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