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[Re: To Thine Own Self Be True 1,2, 3/undetermined.]
Your comments are well received and a few even made me chuckle, and
I'm always grateful when something makes me chukcle.
After reviewing chapter 1 which I was trying to use as a third to
first person transition from the prologue, I have to agree, it
didn't work the way I hoped. I will rework the chapter a little
later and again offer it up for your disection. :-)
It's probably because I haven't had my morning coffee yet, but I
don't get the
SHOW DON'T TELL!!
As for the way Buffy and Willow got together, it was supposed to
make you scratch your head. I hope some will be explained in
chapter 5.
> I remain, as always,
> Mad-Hamlet
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